"Just don't give up", he said.
"Just don't give up", he begged.
We make our bed
And we lie in it.
There's so much more, you know.
I've still got so much more to give,
So much more to show you.
Just give me time.
You're mine
And I never thought the day would come
When I'd stand here empty handed
Regretting taking you for granted.
"Just don't give up", he said.
As I walked away,
He didn't plead.
He never begged.
Not even a single word was said.
That was just the hopeful scenario in my head.
4 comments:
Omg! that was amazing!
I was there somehow, in this Exact situation with my very best friend,
I regret taking her for granted, and I didn't do much to Our friendship thinking in matter what I did, In matter what I act she will be there!
You should write Part Two! :D and see what happens lol!
Keep Up the good work! :D
aya, thanks alot for the feedback!! i think a part 2 will be great and will work on it, just for you :). since you were on the opposite side i was on, however, i dont think you will like the consequences :D.. but i wish you well with her and any other similar experience that would face you ahead =]
Consequences, lool! I do hate the consequences why?! first it is 12 alphabet :P , second I agree with you, Every one has to pay for things he did!
And No ,Me and My very best friend are done, in matter how much i love her, she won't take me back, which was killing me, but I am trying to get my life together and move on!
Girl You brought memories walahi!
Like your style begad :)
thanks aya begad!! it makes me feel so much better when i hear things like that :D and ur story reminded me of a bestfrnd i lost too. learn from ur mistakes and move on, if there's no fixing the matter. it will help you appreciate the next bestfriend that comes along :) wish you the best and keep commenting! ur comments make me feel good :D:D
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